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Sunday, 17 January 2016

An Invisible Thread!



Her heart was laced
With fog and mist;
He wiped it clean 
With his amorous touch
And showed her 
The sparkling dreams
That languished there
Since years.

The gesture didn't demand
Ounces of intricate words;
It all happened in the
Canopy of a magical silence
With an assuring look
And an invisible thread
That bind their souls together
Since ages.

-Purba Chakraborty
14.01.2016



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79 comments:

  1. Love those first two opening lines.....so magical :-)

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  2. Beautiful! Such a sweet & romantic write Purba :D I adore this piece.
    Thank you so much for participating :D


    Lots of love,
    Sanaa

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    1. Aww...thank you so much, dear.
      So glad that you adore this piece. I totally enjoyed writing on the prompt.
      Much love <3

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  3. Wow.. that's so romantic and ethereal.. Loved your choice of words to the core.. :)

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    1. Thank you so much dear. Happy you loved it :) <3

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  4. Reads like a love song...a delightful read indeed. Warm greetings!

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    1. Thank you so very much. Have a wonderful day :)

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  5. Heart touching lines Purba, loved this poem :)

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    1. So glad you loved it, Prasanna. Thank you :)

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  6. Some of the most uplifting and profound things do not require a lot of words - beautifully illustrated here

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    1. Exactly, Jae. Too much explanations often confuse a person. Gestures matter more than words.
      Thank you so much :)

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  7. What a beautiful poem of love and trust. Really beautiful.

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    1. Thank you so much for the lovely comment :)

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  8. absolutely wonderful loving words and wisdom for such a young soul

    gracias for sharing your heart

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    1. I am so glad you liked it. Thanks for the beautiful comment :)

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  9. Love can be like that when it is at its best.

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  10. A beautiful poem of connection and love!

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  11. Oh Purba this is just so amazing....the way a heart can unbind another with 'Canopy of a magical silence'....it is blissful when it happens!

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    1. Indeed Donna, it's blissful when someone can convey a lot in the canopy of magical silence.
      Thanks much for your lovely comment :)

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  12. Canopy of a magical silence
    With an assuring look


    love these lines !

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    1. Glad you loved them. Thank you, Suyash :)

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  13. You've been inspiring me! Great work, again!

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    1. Thank you so much, Alok. Your words are so encouraging :)

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  14. this was romantic. I enjoyed this silence very much. thanks!

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    1. I am so glad you enjoyed it, James. Thank you :)

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  15. The first four lines took my heart away
    "Her heart was laced
    With fog and mist;
    He wiped it clean
    With his amorous touch
    Very beautifully described Purba. Serene, calm, transcendent... love is all about speaking silence through hearts. It's neither told nor listened but felt.
    I can feel that silence in your words.

    Very beautifully expressed. :)

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    1. You've said it so beautifully, Ma'am. I am so happy that the first 4 lines of my poem could take away your heart. Thank you so much for the lovely comment. It's always a pleasure to see you here <3

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  16. Beautiful lines dear...your writing always impacts me so much...love reading your work :-)

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  17. The immense romanticism in the lines...the soft words spoken in silence...just so serene and beautiful! ... :-)

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  18. First two lines blow me. Beautiful poem

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  19. ah...the invisible and silent thread of deep love...it's a beauty Purba...

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  20. Very beautifully expressed Purba.

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  21. Beautiful choice of words dear.. this is so ethereal. Kudos! :)

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  22. What a lovely poem! The best of the romances are always muted and wordless. May be, that's what makes them immortal.

    Beautiful as ever, Purba! :)

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    1. I totally agree with you, Rakesh.
      Thank you so much. Glad you liked it :)

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  23. "It all happened in the
    Canopy of a magical silence"

    How wonderful to have experienced this truth.

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  24. It all happened in the
    Canopy of a magical silence.... that caught my fancy also

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  25. This is so magical. Love the flow of words, Purba :)

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  26. I rarely enjoy an English poem.
    And this is that rare thing. :)
    Good one Purba!

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    1. So glad to know that, Yogesh.
      Thank you so very much :)

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  27. It's a beautiful one Purba :-)
    Been missing you on Drishti :-(

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    1. Thank you dear :)
      Loved your latest haiku <3

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  28. Silence can tell so much, and leave its mark more than words at times. :) I liked that it had something positive this time.

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    1. True. Silence is an enigma. It hurts as well as heals.
      Glad you liked it :)

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  29. Loved it when you posted the first half on Instagram. Second verse added to the beauty of the poem. Too good, Purba.

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    1. Thank you so much, Saru. Means a lot when it comes from you. Glad you loved it dear :)

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