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Wednesday, 4 November 2015

Bubble of Tranquility



Eyes closed
Head feels heavy
The jabbing pain in heart
The fervent ache in body
Crystal clear and prominent.
Sitting in lotus position,
I try to focus
Breathe in, breathe out
Breathe in, breathe out
The breathing matters, nothing else
You are alive and full of energy
That's all matters, nothing else.
After a while,
Peace replaces angst
My mind feels empty
I feel I am floating in the space
Secured in the bubble of tranquility
All my thoughts jumping around it,
But I am nonchalant.
Eyes closed,
A smile of harmony kiss my lips.



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48 comments:

  1. A smile of harmony kiss my lips...

    Excellent write. Stellar last line Purba :D :D

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  2. Lovely! I struggled with the very thing earlier today with the same result. I love that you captured this in poetry.

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    1. That's great to know, Susan. Thank you :)

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  3. I have always admired those who are seriously into yoga....your poem expresses so well the way tranquility can be achieved by its practice. Makes me envious!

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    1. Yoga is truly beautiful, Mary. I sincerely wish I can give more time to it. Thanks for the lovely comment :)

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  4. My thoughts resonate with those of Mary. Your words paint a yogic picture. I'm reminded of my brief stint with the practices.
    Nicely penned. :-)
    -HA

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  5. Reading this made me very peaceful!!

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  6. That's the Power of Concentration and Meditation.. Rightly said, Purba!

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  7. Last line says it all...beautiful!

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  8. Yes, those ultimate words are stunning in this relaxing piece.

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  9. You are at the peaceful place possible. Much Love!

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  10. Certainly wonderful if that works...!!

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  11. "I feel I am floating in the space
    Secured in the bubble of tranquility"

    I read this *10 times, this is the realiity and mindfullness. Very nice work Purba :)

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    1. I am so happy to know that, Prasanna. Thanks a lot :)

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  12. It sounds like you have actually had this experience with meditation. Something I have never been able to do, despite my efforts. Well done.

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    1. Yes, it was indeed tough in the beginning, but then at a time when I was going through a challenging phase, meditation helped me immensely.
      Thanks a lot :)

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  13. This is a good reminder to sit with the pain to reach the tranquillty.

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  14. Such a soothing read to my senses. The ending says it all... loved the last line especially! Very beautifully penned dear. <3

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    1. Thank you so much, my dear. So happy to know that you loved it <3

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  15. Reminds me that tranquility does not just come - we have to make it so! wonderfully written

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  16. Oh that describes meditation so perfectly ~ on a good day, anyway!

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    1. ha ha :D Right! Good to see you here, Clairey :)

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  17. An apt portrayal of meditation with your enchanting words.. loved it.. :)

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  18. I just love reading your poems. They reflect lots of emotions and thoughts.

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    1. This is such a wonderful compliment, Swati. Thanks a ton, dear :)

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  19. how can you create magic everytime with your words ? :) soothing :)

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    1. That's so sweet of you, Sachin.
      Glad you liked it :)

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