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Wednesday, 28 October 2015

The Day We Met



Miracles and magic always enticed me
Yet my life was crawling at a mundane pace
Till that day...
The day we met
Accidentally or coincidentally still remains a question
A question I love to ponder on,
At the end of a long, hectic day
In the cozy minutes of my expensive leisure.


When our eyes met that day,
Gentle beads of elation twinkled on my heart
A plethora of liveliness washed over my soul
Waking me up to life...
Life in its true vibrancy and dynamism
Have I ever been this happy before?
Another question I love to ponder on
In my moments of velvety, warm solitude.


My questions start with you
And my answers end with you;
Dear beloved, it's your company
That wakes me up to the sun and the moon.


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56 comments:

  1. This is so heartwarming & beautiful :D lovely work Purba :D

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  2. Pondering and finding images "In the cozy minutes of my expensive leisure." And this is definitely a poem that would animate beautifully.

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    1. Thank you so much, Susan. Your comment made my day. Thanks for the prompt :)

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  3. Oh, that closing line is especially wonderful. We are never more fully alive than when we are in love. Enjoy every beautiful moment!

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    1. So true, Sherry. I am so glad you liked the poem. Thanks much :)

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  4. Heart touching poem Purba, it's very emotional. Those two lines "My questions start with you and my answers end with you" are really with a lot of meaning hidden in them.

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    1. Thank you so much, Prasanna. Glad you liked it :)

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  5. So nice to feel so animated in the presence of another! That's what love does...smiles.

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  6. So heartwarming dear... there are a lot of beautiful emotions amalgamated into it.... Especially, I loved "My questions start with you and my answers end with you". So much of depth! <3

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    1. Thank you so much dear for the lovely comment. So happy that you loved the poem :)

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  7. This is so beautiful, lets hope there is someone in you life to make you feel this way.

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  8. Lovely how love wakes us up, brings us to life, and sets everything in motion.

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  9. True love certainly does animate. This love poem says 'love' in such a unique and sincere way. i like it so much!

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    1. I am so glad that you liked it so much, Myrna. Thank you :)

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  10. Such beautiful lines...great writings are the ones which everyone can relate to...and I can definitely relate to these lines :-)

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    1. I am so happy that you could relate to the lines dear. Thanks a ton for the lovely comment :)

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  11. Wonderful lines Purba.. How you manage to great such a wonderful magic of words every time???

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    1. Aww....that's so sweet of you Anjali. Thanks much :)

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  12. my my... so heart warming my lovely girl :-) hugs!!

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  13. I especially like "My questions start with you."

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  14. The last verse was a sublime ending to this wonderful poem - more than an average love poem because it gives that space an accommodation of both you and the other person

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    1. Thank you so much, Jae. Your compliment means a lot. So glad you liked the poem :)

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  15. Love wakes us up to a new reality. Lovely poem.

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  16. The concluding lines are just too good Purba!! Very beautiful poem....

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    1. It means a lot when it comes from you. Thank you, Panchali Ma'am :)

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  17. If words have texture these are soft delicate lines. :) Very well written. :)

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    1. That's so sweet of you dear. Thanks a ton :)

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  18. Love is eternal and expressing that love is a unique blessing in Nature given by God to all of us.. The best lines of Poetry.. Well said, Purba!

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  19. The beauty and charm of love! Well done :)

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  20. a brave sentence evokes answers and solutions,
    the process is indeed animated.

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  21. Such a lovely and beautiful poem.. loved every bit of it.. Well done dear :)

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    1. I am so glad that you loved it dear. Thank you :)

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  22. This is so lovely and beautiful... A masterpiece...

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  23. I absolutely adore this...that was how I met my true love....a chance meeting...maybe not. The last stanza is magical....my questions and answers....swoon on these words!

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    1. How wonderful it is to know that you met your love in this way! Thanks for sharing, Donna. Your comment made me smile. Stay blessed always :)

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  24. Life goes on, and then something happens.....someone was waiting, and life begins anew.

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    1. You have put it so rightly, Annell. Thanks for the lovely comment :)

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  25. Passion weather in a relationship or in an occupation gives such wonderful perspective as eyes are more fully awake

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